When I looked in the mirror I remembered what u said
"the scars in my veins remind me of what I am, so sad"
When hatred meets pain, innocence dies.
When depression meets the heart, my veins just cry.
Misery needs a friend, you know.
A contest entry
- i'm angry! quick contest - at least 10 lines - will close in one hour. by sideways hourglass.
400 points, ended October 17, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow... Great word choice in this piece. I loved the concept and the overall quality of this piece.
"When hatred meets pain, innocence dies...
... Misery needs a friend, you know."
Those were my two favorite lines.
Thank you so much for an awesome write. -
I hear you. I hope things get better. Thanks for entering.
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