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Palette



Palette
R.L. Keeney, M.E. Ramey
10/10/2009

I rather like pink, but I don't prefer blue.
and purple is nice, but it's both of the two.
Of course whats good is a little green..
the blue and yellow in-between!
Maybe add some lighter off white,
enough to just offset the night.
The shade changes with a little black,
then splash with an orange attack!
And while the new hue is violet,
with metallic green beguile it.
Add red to white to make some pink,
also called lightish red I think.
I think I'd rather use indigo.
Clear light green is peridot.
Maybe a lighter purple named lavender
gild like gold and copper were.
Crimson reminds me of blood,
..dipping in a white rose bud..
Add a touch of a dull brown,
random colors swirl around.
Throw a bright teal into the mix..
blueish-green for a color fix.
Dancing in a faint blue rain,
paisley rainbows entertain.
Its multicolored, loads of fun..
spanning over everyone!

Author notes

This poem was written by two friends back and forth over a period of days, one line at a time.
This is the 3rd poem from the Keeney/Ramey Olaat poetry game.
Keeney: Odds Ramey: Evens

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