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brave new world

all in a brave new world , children dulled with drugs
happiness at a price ,choice of your soul
savage take a seat
people kisses endly with dyed lips
world is not what it used to be
in a brave new world

dull your brain savage , all is lost
welcome to were mothers and fathers are no more
give up the foolishly
see those swans dying , twisted wings of life and death

an outcast among sinners
dying to tell truth to those who are to blind
to see , you crave mothers warmth
ship him out , to island unknown
see if he like it out there

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brave new world by maiden based on a book

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  • weathergirl123
    October 18

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    Great

    I think this is a great poem. I've read the book as well as heard the song, and I think you managed to capture both very well here. Thanks for entering my contest!