Nightingale Estate; home to much
unexplained paranormal activities...
echoes of haunting hymns has been heard
in these walls throughout history
The ghost of Gloria Nightingale is said to be
lurking through the darken halls of the estate...
if you’re not a believer in the supernatural, come stay a night;
goose bumps will creep as you walk through the front gate
During your stay, if you happen to stumble across Gloria,
a banshee now known as the Nightingale Stalker,
I suggest that you run like hell
because if this phantom catches you;
you will be doomed in a blackened cell
The Nightingale Stalker has paralyzing powers
and uses telepathy to engulf your mind, body and soul...
this ghastly entity will overwhelm you and
lead you into sunken chambers that are black as coal
Deep within these submerged chambers lies the eerie
unsolved mystery surrounding these uncanny halls...
there is one stone wall that ripples like water
after being entrapped and summoned by the banshee call
The rippling wall is actually a gateway
to a hellish prehistoric-like kingdom
where tiny insects become as large as
humans in this demonic infestation
Flying bugs will swoop from the skies; giant worms will
emerge from the ground stinging you in an unconscious state...
each bug has a vital purpose, imprisoning you within a nest
where you will become an appetizer for the queen of this estate
The queen, known as Gloria, is a humongous mutant being...
she has the body of a hideous, fanged woman, eight legs like a spider,
and also has giant black wings of a vampire bat...
this devilish queen feeds only on humans that are preserved in cocoons...
these trapped carcasses keep her strong to rule in this evil bloodbath
So if you feel brave, you are cordially welcomed
to spend an evening at the haunted Nightingale Estate...
perhaps, you will meet thy Queen Gloria,
if so you will never leave through the front gate
A contest entry
- Dark, Haunting, Poems Please by JeannieD Hunter.
1300 points, ended October 22, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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holy hell.
I've been watching alot of "Ghost Hunters International" lately, and altho there are skeptics out there, i believe in the paranormal, and quite frankly, this scared the shit out of me!
well done
gratz on the HM, altho it deserved more
♥
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excellent
Ohhhhhhhhh
This got my attention from the very start....
Love it............all way to the end
Best of luck in the contest and nice to meet you as well
I entered this one too..........do hope you come give mine a read as well
Again good luck
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Oooh how cool and creepy! Great combination!
I love stories, movies, and poems that border on the creepy
Awesome write, my friend!
Wish you the very best in this contest!
Hugs,
Sandy -
Wow~
Holy Toledo with a Speedo
Now this is why I have to console my quill
that it will be okies to pen for this contest
because YOU da bomb
Love the way You weaved this and when I
saw this contest~ My Mind went...
South...
it ran like Hades and didn't look back
You spilled some serious ink here my
Dear Friend~
I'll have to itch nay my piece and start
over~ ...kicks up AP Dirt
j/k
I tend to be last minute because I move
like a
when it comes to contests
must be the Happy
I meant to take 
Excellente~ Adore the rhyme also the
story~ Woot! Woot!
When I got to giant worms...
I lost my din din...
All Your fault
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Spooky side
Best wishes in this contest~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
What a great write for the halloween contest. Very well expressed an spooky. Best of luck in the contest
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halloween funky fun?
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