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He’s no longer into flings, liaisons, or one night stands; nothing without obligations.  He’s had his share of them and in the end always felt like shit.  No, not just shit,  but stepped on dog shit.  At the end of each muddled affair, he felt as if pieces of him were left behind like footprints leading back to the steaming pile he once was.  And in his day, he was a pretty decent turd.


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  • poetryality silver member
    October 28

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    Yup! Leaves a smelly residue, doesn't it!

    A very famous deceased friend (Robert Jr. Lockwood, Blues Legend) once told us, as he and his band were the live musicians for our play "Rabbit's Foot"...

    "Be careful who you lay down with because you don't know what spirit you will get up with."

    Glad to know that you're beginning to settle down. My son did, about three years ago. He will be 35 on Saturday (Bud), and he is happier now than he has ever been, with his wife and little girl.

    I love "muddled affair". What a reality are those two words. I am smiling over here because you are like a son to me Dez! Good for you!


    Always ♥

    Renee (Honorary Mom)


  • LaMerci
    October 21

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    LOLLLLLLL

    You know you off right LOLlll. I love the way you write and this is so vivid but I hate when you use dooky as metaphors (you are too good at that too)...You are too much Dez and always so entertaining.

  • Tecohe
    October 18

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    Interesting comparison. Missing something...sort of like a great idea too quickly executed. You seem a bit off your usual delivery. Love the idea of this feeling expressed by a man. Seldom is this side spoken of publicly.
    Tecohe


    • secberm
      October 18
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      Thanks, sis. This is a snippet of a larger piece.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 18

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    L.O.L

    Wow, i'm uhm trying to 'sidestep' the crap here to say, wow what a great way to express your position on a monogamous relationship..very much laced with humor, but alot of truth as well.. big ups to you my bro. you are a one of a kind guy homie..you make me feel proud to know you..


  • blueyez
    October 17

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    haha... you're still a great turd
    I can relate to this so much sebby


    • secberm
      October 17
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      Thanks, sweets. I think most of us has been there.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 17

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    Ehh.. I think we've all had a bit of that.. the crap we do to get us through until we realize it just leaves us hollow and it's time to move on.

    Cool write

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