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Poems For a Deceased Mother: I

She is always present
At night, in my dreams,
During the evening, in my thoughts,
She abounds, her memories overflowing.

I am seeking vainly to grasp her--
To hold her completely,
For despite her constant presence,
I cannot see her how I used to.

Her voice has grown faint,
No longer even a whisper.
Therefore, I cannot hear her
How I used to.

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  • paul claxton
    November 3
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    again so well done Bravo mate


  • nasty24
    October 17

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    awww!! this is good. she'll always be in your heart no matter what. she's in your blood. my sister lost her mom a couple months ago. again great poem remember your a part of her.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 17

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    Awww. Listen with your heart instead of your ears, dear Scribe. She is always whispering there. I won't say "I know how you feel", since no one ever does...but I lost my mother in 1999, so I have some idea. She is proud of you and what you do, my Friend. Be assured of that.