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home.


it is a house  home to ghosts.

it is an empty vessel occupied by no one.

 

 

 

 

I do not belong here.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Mr-Nevers gold member
    October 20

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    Lol, when I first saw this it was all white with white text I had to highlight in order to see. It totally went along with the poem. It was like ghost-text. I can't help but wonder why someone wouldn't belong in an unoccupied house. Unless of course there was a backstory to the house or it's locale.
    Irregardless, tres bon.


    • Astrid gold member
      October 20

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      I s'pose the page/background didn't load then, did it?

      *takes off background*

      that was obviously my intent. >.>

      • Mr-Nevers gold member
        October 20
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        It did afterwards, it just took a bit longer to download I'm guessing.

        Ain't no thing, nobody will ever know.
        You're secret is safe with me.