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Look What You've Done

Her presence lingers
Since the day she ran
A touch from her icy fingers
Leaves a scar on this broken man

The truth has fallen absent
As lies and tricks become her nature
True love is insignificant
By her actions nothing is sacred

Used up and tossed aside
Their years of memories wasted
She gave up love for another guy
Such bitterness is forever tasted

He gave her everything
And she took it all
By a thread his life is hanging
By a single word he shall fall

To this woman he called his wife
His worth fades to none
Once, she was his life
By her choices he is undone
These are words of the man you've broken.
How could you?

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 20

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    my heart was moved by this pain
    I am sorry ss

    love and blessings

    Rend

  • Sorry, just told my husband of 5 years that I want a divorce....This made me feel like CRAP!!! lol J/K You put so much emotion into this...Your pain is tangible... Great job! As for wisdom for mending...Write! Pretty much the only way I can even really think straight is for me to "write" my way through it.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 19

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    im sorry but you know the saying theres plenty more fish in the see, try there is more than way out the labyrinth
    yeah well i hope things work out for you and im here if you need to talk at all.
    A really grewaat write and a lot of emoition and imagery. Great job!
    -penguin/holly-