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Teddy Bear

I have had this bear
since the day I was born
so it's kind of limp
and old and torn

One eye is missing
he's got a crooked smile
But he's beautiful to me
I love him all the while

He has a band-aid on his back
there's a story behind that
his shirt is without buttons
and I lost his big yellow hat

but he loves me all the same
and always listens to what I have to say
this old brown Teddy bear
is in my heart to stay

I will always have him
for he is my best friend
with his crooked smile and missing eye
he's here for me till the end

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