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silent death

i cry of pain......
and noone sees.........
i scream of hurt.........
and noone hears...........
i kill all amotions.........
and noone cares.......
i staw away..........
and noone knows........
i kill myself............
and they all wonder............

tell me what needs to be improved plz

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  • Grey Wolfe
    October 29
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    amazing...

    I'm so sorry that I'm missing u all the time... I guess thats what happens when ur always "thirsty"- katt


  • Cannot.Be.Forsaken
    October 17
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    i love it alot!!! but u still cant spell lol


  • XXAgedWithDespairXx
    October 17
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    wow...that was really awesome. Very sad, and very powerful. I like it tons.