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This time i cry.....

this time i cry
with tears black as night
falling from my heart
onto my sole
day by day
never slowing
they fall forever.......

this time i cry
with tears red as blood
leaving my sole
and onto my heart
flowing forever
without the smalest hint of stoping........

this time i cry
with blood and night
leaving my body
and leaving my heart
untill its all out.............

this time i cry
i never wake up...............

tell me what needs to be improved plz

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