Stains taint to the tears falling
run away emotions slide upon ice
as the coolness rests
and, footprints leave impressions
solitary.
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A contest entry
- Word Prompt: Semi-Quickie by mgmc.
800 points, ended October 20, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Another amazing write. And so very vivid. Congratulations on the gold. -
I see the imprint of "solitary footprints" in my life these days. Me and hubby are so busy that it seems we are walking as one instead of the two we are supposed to be. Thank you for this poem. You have made me realize that is is time to meld what we need to meld. EXCELLENT! I love the brevity! CONGRATS ON EARNING THE GOLD CHALICE. Very worthy of the merit received!
Much Love ♥
renee
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Lately I feel like I am leaving solitary foot prints rather than walking with my partner.....Its such a hard feeling knowing that coolness prevails where warmth once danced!! This was just beautiful Jules and definately worthy of a gold!! Congrats.....
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Wow sis, this was SO worth
the gold in so many ways.
I LOVE the coolness
expressed through
a winter's breath.
Your language is faultless,
and this reads so smoothly.
Stunning wrok
& congrats
xx
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Deep message in a few brief well chosen words. Very nice. God bless.
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Excellent
What a terrific write. you did so much with so few words. Best of luck in the contest
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So much said with very little words. That is true talent! You express the pain of finding yourself in solitude well here. This is a great poem, keep writing!
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Thank you for your lovely comment
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Beautifully worded. Imagery that leaves a lasting impression. This is wonderful.
Thanks for your entry. It makes me glad I held the contest!
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Many thanks
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