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She’s going
To the court.
For some small
Not even wanted
Misunderstanding.
They’ve charged her
As she’s committed
A brutal crime.
As far as it’s known,
No blood has been drained,
No gun was used
No one has been injured;
A car has been crashed,
Even not smashed,
But they told her:
Yes, we know
It’s not a real crime,
But it was one of us,
Who’s day has been spoilt.
And a car,
Yes, it will be repaired
From the common budget.
But we’ve already charged you
And cannot take that back.

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  • Dobar Dan
    November 21
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    Hello Moja Sona - Kako si ?

    Great little poem Sona - I like the way you set a real-life happening and put it to poetry - great story too - the poem is an easy readf - even-though I am a rhymer - lol - wheres the short stories you were going to send me ? - keep on keeping on my dear one - hugs - Bless God - Tvoj Josipe - dobar dan ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- zdravo