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Pow-wow Famous

Going out into the hot, hot sun.
Circling the world in the ruffled feathers.
For yourself and all the others before

Late on Sunday night
Time to make some money

For a moment the rest of the world stops
and you are the one

Life in the cirle
like the whole world
everybody knows you
and shakes your hand

Living on the Pow-wow Trail

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  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    November 15
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    it's always good to feel part of a bigger family...that's what this piece makes me think. To experience and appreciate that are both wonderful feelings. Well done.
    Rory


  • ReachingForStars
    October 17

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    i love this!!!! been forever since i was at a pw, but you never really forget how it feels when everyone smiles and takes the time to see how you are, how ya been, how's your mom. this captures that in a way. beautiful write, Unc!
    -Kelly

    • Blackrabbit
      October 18
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      Thank you for your comment, I guess I didn't do such a bad job convaying what I was hoping to get across. I was worried. But not anymore. thanks again Kel

      Rabbit