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Take my Hand

Please do not go away
Just take my hand
Do not leave my side
Always be with me

Just take my hand
Join in my journey
We can help one another
Please do not leave me

Be my rock and best friend
Helping me until the end
Just take my hand
And it can start

You are caring and kind
My best and truest friend
Continue to be there always
Just take my hand

Please tell me what you think

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  • Ani Grace
    6 hours ago
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    Ahhh...the extension of the hands...my favorite part...
    and well we meet...
    Blessings to ya...
    ...Ani Grace...

  • JstaTch
    October 26
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    Humility starts with a simple request. You have demonstrated the start of something interesting.


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    October 22

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    This was a very beautifully written piece you have here. I found this really enjoyable too read. This was good. Anyways. Keep up the good work.


  • She burns
    October 19
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    Your sweetest and most touching yet, so true to the heart

  • PianoMan
    October 17

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    This is a very touching poem. I couldn't help but think of the Friend that we have that promised to never leave us. He will always be there for us and will help us through anything and everything so we have nothing to fear. Wonderful poem!

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