Taking you to terror true,
unconscious from the street.
Keep you doped and tightly roped,
become my carnal treat.
Whimpered plea, ‘Please don’t hurt me’
I tell you, ‘It’s alright.’
I tape your mouth and journey south,
And consummate the night.
Grinding hips and fastened lips,
and grasping lady lumps.
Sawing limbs, while singing hymns,
as morphine numbs your stumps.
Flaying skin for what’s within,
while keeping you alive.
I decree in blood-soaked glee,
‘You’ll live but won’t survive.’
Carving flesh, so warm and fresh,
with herbs atop my shelf.
Roasting meat, so soft and sweet,
I feed you to yourself.
‘Just stay calm, my lucky charm,
I do not wish you pain.
I have to feed this savage need
that’s driving me insane.
No more sorrow, come tomorrow,
for you will cease to be.
I know its wrong, but oh so strong,
it haunts and tortures me.'
And so comes death, your final breath
as life fades from your eyes.
Left alone, my monster grown
becomes what I despise.
Please forgive this life I live,
for I have no control.
In too deep and losing sleep
as demons take their toll.
End me please, this sick disease,
just warps and twists my mind.
Make me stop, in death I’ll drop
and leave this fiend behind.
Someone please kill me…
Author notes
Horror... Check! Gore... Check! Scary... Check! Hope ya like it Sis... 
This is a work of fiction & in no way condones the imagery & mindstates expressed within...
BG from http://dark.pozadia.org/images/wallpapers/__EYES_OF_A_MURDER__-561905.jpeg
A contest entry
- While I'm gone by Firequeen.
1050 points, ended November 3, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LIKE? Hmmm lets see suspense
gore blood and down right scary
It's sooo perfect..
You had me on the edge of my seat
Thank you for the entry bro
I love it
keep the ink flowing
fire
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Whats your poison?....LOL...This is GREATNESS!!!!! Love the rhyme and the storyline
You
my socks off dude!!!!
Grinding hips and fastened lips,
and grasping lady lumps.
Sawing limbs, while singing hymns,
as morphine numbs your stumps.
Flaying skin for what’s within,
while keeping you alive.
I decree in blood-soaked glee,
‘You’ll live but won’t survive.’
A macabre and horrific masterpiece!!!!!
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wow! this was just great. its hard to write horror poetry but you craced it. I00% x
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Well holy heck that was frightening!! Lordy me.. I'm glad this is fiction lol
Brilliantly written!!
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sick
sir you are just sick...sick
an excellent poem dude as always....the inner rapist coming out in your words...
thank god i know you and know that this is just creative writing otherwise i might be scared......
Whimpered plea, ‘Please don’t hurt me’
I tell you, ‘It’s alright.’
I tape your mouth and journey south,
And consummate the night.
a nasty few lines here.....this is dark my friend
keep up the great work....
love
Jayde
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Excellent
as alawys you rock it
twisted and insaine... superb
outstanding rhyme and flow
from start to end it pull the
reader in until the last line
keep up the awsome work dear friend
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky
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