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Sleepy Thoughts

As midnight comes near
I sit in my place here
Thinking and minutes pass
My pillow looks inviting
But do I stay and write
No choice, my eyes are closing
I have to say goodnight

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 24
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    Exactly how I feel when I have to say goodnight to my writing sometimes. I say I'll just finish this one though, but then it goes on. Great write.


  • She burns
    October 19
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    We all need to rest, then we can dream again

  • JstaTch
    October 17

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    Sweet dreams. Now put that pen down, turn off the lights and go to sleep hugging that pillow. Come back tomorrow with more interesting poems.

  • PianoMan
    October 17

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    Wow. You seem to write at night alot. Do you ever actually go to sleep??!?!?!?! Lol. Your pillow looks inviting, but it seems like you keep writing and increasing in your amazing talent of writing. Great job!