The heaven of my life cries with humbleness
when it is I have found
my relationship with thee
In mine hour of darkness
thou has come
embracing these weak shoulders
with a touch of thy peace
I have found, in life's pain
solace within thy realm
even a solace of sitting upon
mine earthly father's knee
crying in despair
wrapped securely
in the arms of his love
Thou hast heard mine callings
stabling existence with the provision of strength
one that I may call upon
in finding the desire to live
allowing mine light to shine
falling not into the snares of agony
In a list
A contest entry
- when I talk to you... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended October 18, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Surrending to HIM itslf is a solace and pain free world..and you have acknowledged it so beautifully with all your humbleness..well done..
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Bountiful~Wise...
Flowing mellifluously through the river of faith, "Solace" reaches the ocean of hope, and mingles with its waves in the shores of hope. A majestic sublime singing in poetic beauty.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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oooh I really like this. It's worded so beautifully. Great job, good luck in the contest!!!!
~Michaela~
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