My beautiful Mia is now in the heavens above,
Smiling with warmth and eternal love.
She sits with the Angels, being protected within their wings,
And she peacefully sleeps as her Guardian Angel sings.
She is wrapped up safely, blissfully unaware,
Of how my heart is broken beyond repair,
For she should be sleeping upon my breast,
But the Angels have taken her to peacefully rest.
I will miss her more and more with every passing day,
But I know she will hear me as I pray,
So hear these words my beautiful one,
“I will love you eternally,” from my heart you will never be gone.
Author notes
This is a poem about my beautiful baby that i miscarriaged recently, i miss her and will always love her xxx
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I'm so sorry for your loss. I'm not a mother and have no idea what it is like to go through this, but I have family who have lost their children and I've seen how hard it is. Thanks much for sharing your experience. Best of luck.
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Aww i'm so sorry for your loss. It's a terrible thing to have to go through i'm sure... but it's good that she can hear you loving her. Beautifully sad poem.
Thanks so much for entering and best of luck in the contest x -
Oh this is so heartbreaking, and it has really tugged at my heart for you. You have beautifully expressed such deep emotion and pain here, and I am truly sorry for the loss of your precious little angel. Blessings, Patty


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really powerful write
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This is a very strong piece you have here. It was moving! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering and bst of luck too you in the contset.
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perfect
Very powerful. Love the way it makes me think of how heaven is. One can only hope to have just a little bit of the love you have for Mia. -
aww so sad....

but such a beautiful poem....its wonderful it brought tears to my eyes :'(
keep up your amazing work hunny! hope your okay .. x x x

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Wonderfully sad
I could feel the strong emotion
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