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Body’s Eyes Don’t See

body’s eyes don’t see
what is really happening
we are in the dark



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  • Draig aine gold member
    October 24

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    a most excellent dark ku

    I agree with my sister this has an eerie shiver in your words i like


  • Shantti
    October 18

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    This is eerie to me. Very well done, but eerie. Probably because we're so close to halloween It reminds me of being in the pitch black woods at night, with sounds of owls and animals and rustling leaves, but you can't see your hand infront of your face. I guess that's what reality is like alot of times huh?
    Love this, thank you so much for entering


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 17

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    this is so true

    we are in the dark looking outwad

    the light is within, this is where our true sight is

     

    very profound Bonita

    very well done

    God bless you my friend...