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bombs of lead

this shit is bomb
i've been digging graves
waiting until someone caves
acting out like im part of the play
its not a tradgedy its how weve made
a living and not just getting laid
im not letting my life set and fade
bitch its why im the boss
it is my game, it is your loss
call it heads, i'll give this coin a toss
but you know ill win, so why even call?

ill break this brick on top yo head
turn your flesh into zombie dead
and when you say it was what i said
i'll trade your heart for a pound of lead

i dont believe your anything
except an empty grave i forgot to see
forgot your flowers, forgot to believe
that you were the one that had loved me
i'm better than you, it's what i let
myself to fail, but you won the bet
upon my heart you laid to rest
the part of me that'll miss you best

ill break this brick on top yo head
turn your flesh into zombie dead
and when you say it was what i said
i'll trade your heart for a pound of lead

now im not going to take this shit
i wont let out a single bit
and when you cry and throw a fit
i'll do with you as i see best
i'll make you feel like it was me who left
i'll blow your brains, are you fucking deaf?
and when your done and out of breath
i'll make it seem like your capital theft

ill break this brick on top yo head
turn your flesh into zombie dead
and when you say it was what i said
i'll trade your heart for a pound of lead

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  • Did you say crap? No? Oh, rap! I see now, though crap may fit better. This is empty. There is no emotion here. You have to feel it, even if you are "rapping" it. If you don't feel it, no one else will! I think under all the bs, the talent is there, you just gotta learn how to channel yourself/emotions into it. Yes, it hurts to be so open sometimes, but the outcome is worth it! Let me know if you decide not to block me and take me up on the advice, I would love to read something that you truly put yourself into!!!