Gentle weeping,
Easing the way I morn you,
So warming and temperate…
Yet still I am here alone and stressed.
Silent sorrow,
Lifting my chin and frowning my brow,
Thinking of where you might be…
Somewhere with sunshine I hope.
Drunken depression,
Making me feel like life is all good,
I sip on my glass and take the next dance…
The one time you’re dancing with me.
Going Away,
Is something so simple,
I wish I can join you someday…
But I’ll hurt everyone like you did.
Author notes
This is dedicated to my friend Kareem. RIP bro.
A contest entry
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This was amazing. I really liked the second stanza, this was a very moving piece you have here. Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest. Sorry for your loss.
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thank you
I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece, this has been the first poem that I posted on this site in over a year, and i figured that it would be the perfect tribute to my late friend. Thank you for the comment and I hope that you enjoy judging your contest.
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may all the ones we've lost rest in peace bro...im here for ya!
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