There was a fuzzy wuzzy bear
Sitting on my bed
He was wearing spotty underwear
And a hat upon his head
He growled "These clothes are very neat
I'm sure you will agree
but somehow they are incomplete
what's missing,can you see?"
"Oh silly fuzzy bear
you really are so funny
you see there's simply nothing there
to cover up you tummy"
He tried on shirts and coats and vests
But nothing was quite right
That fuzzy bear was not impressed
My clothes were all too tight
And then my sister saved the day
She said "I'm pleased to meet you
I wonder would you like to play
at dress up..in my tutu?"
That fuzzy bear could leap and spin
He really was a prancer
Did you ever see a funnier thing
Than a fuzzy ballet dancer?
Author notes
For Jacob and Isabelle...love always...mummy xxx
A contest entry
- Chicken a la Boynton by WaterChild Reborn.
1550 points, ended October 20, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awesome write
this is so great i love it a cute poem for your kids to read and to see thier mom have such a creative mind
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taht is soo adorable, a treat to read. your kids are lucky to have such an awesome creative mother. I can see you still have a little childish charm inside your heart
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reminds me of childhood memories, running about and stripping down to my birthday suit! ha! clothes are over rated. love this T..awesome!
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lol..thanks...you wanna know a secret..( go away all u other nosey readers..come bac in a minute lol)........... sean...hey sean....sshhhh..don't tell lol........if i had my way....i would still run around in precious little...so much more comfy lol
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Another very nice write-the kids will like it as well. Have you heard of the "Ballet de Trocedaro"? More hairy than fuzzy, fun just the same.
Peace
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Love it
very cute and FUZZY.. I truly enjoyed reading this piece...
PKO
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Oh how cute, your kids are so lucky to have a mom like you. And what little kid would not enjoy this lovely poem read to them at bedtime, such beautiful imagery to delight a childs mind. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your silver trophy win, for you surely deserved it Theresa.
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thanks so very much...this was fun to do too...jj loved helping lol...he is one smart kid
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Oh this was adorable! Meter and rhyme flowed so naturally and the story held my little one enthralled all the way through! Your children are so blessed to have such a creative mother
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Aww that's really cute, and funny. Wonderful job.
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a absolute brilliant kids and adult fun write T you amaze this ones a book indeed now get it out there you know you have the goods so come on what holds you back i think is the fear of sucess because you can do it and you know it bless ya hun loved it big lots
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THANKS GLENN...THIS WAS FUN TO DO
I SEND U HUGS BIG GUY
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how lucky are your children
mommy writes better stories and in rhyme then the children's books,
I have a smile stuck on my face while reading, stepping back into memories with my children
rhyme is perfect
and the most adorable story ever...
God bless you my friend...
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FTHANKS SO MUCH FOR THE THOUGHTFUL COMMENTS
T
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Happyful!!!
Smiles T
Ric
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THANKS RIC GRINNIN EAR TO EAR
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Excellent!
I think writing children's verse is a real challenge-- no fudging or faking, no slipping into stuff which might -or might not -have some mystical meaning. You have succeeded so well.
Ps In your earlier incarnation, you were going to send me a list of people.
E
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a fun treat of a read this morning. well done.
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thanks so very much rick its been a while since i did kids stuff
T
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Love it...
This is adorable...
Cute, fun & gave me a smile...
Keep up the good work & good luck in the contest...
Well done!!!
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