I love the way you hold me, your breath upon my face,
the way i feel in your embrace.
Your fingers tingling down my spine,
the sweetness of your lips "oh" so Divine.
My being on fire, with this dizziness, this height,
as you take me into quivering delights.
I'm loving you with all my heart and soul,
this burning desire i can not control.
The touch of your skin makes me feel so alive,
as i melt, and shake, and quiver in side.
I love you so much, i'm pent up with passion,
ready to explode in a red hot fashion.
as you take me into these quivering delights
Author notes
my husband xx
A contest entry
- That- One Special Person! by who iam.
1500 points, ended October 28, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - (For my favorites and friends only sorry)It's about love,friendship and family by Daughter Of Night.
550 points, ended November 11, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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White rose wolf
wow i loved reading this how sweet, sexy and romatic i loved reading this good job adn i wish you luckin my contest -
Per my request to please not enter an entry that has been judged before your entry was entered into another contest and judged upon 10. 23.09.
Sorry,it does not comform with the guidlines of this contest.
It is a very sensual write full of passion and written very well. -
Your poem is very good ,but unfortunately since it is already in a contest and has been commented upon by the judge I must request that you remove it from this contest as it does not conform with my request to "please do not enter an entry that has been judged before".Should you have another poem that fits the criteria please enter it while there is still time.
Thank you.
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The touch of your skin makes me feel so alive,
as I melt, and shake, and quiver inside.
A lively piece. You communicate effectively what you feel
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Sweet and Sexy....
Such a great love you have for your husband.
I love the lines
'I'm loving you with all my heart and soul,
this burning desire i can not control.'
Brilliant write.
Best of luck in the contest
Sonya
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