Twin planets in the sphere of life
floating water to guide us
one planet full of life
love and happiness
Joy to be inhaled by all who enter
no pain
no sorrow
to be found here
The other planet
is dark and forbidding
full of hurt and sorrow
Those who enter here are lost
they have decided to only accept
and not to fight
Choosing to harm themselves and others
the emotionless ones
who can not breathe
Author notes
pic prompt: http://www.abstractdigitalartgallery.com/Thel ma1-abstract-digital-art-fractal-Mystical_Planets.jpg
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest by penman.
2000 points, ended October 19, 2009, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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its hard to saying...
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Wonderful
Very well written, a great take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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