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The Birth of a Martyr

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The Birth of a Martyr


Some of them whispered and some of them prayed,
But no one could reason the sum of them.
Some others had left when they could have stayed,
Recanting the martyr from Bethlehem.
Others told fables of similar feats,
Of retold gospels that keep saints alive.
Still some turned their heads to noble deceits,
In selfish attempts to simply survive.

Yet there on the ground a death becomes birth,
Mortality passed yet long lives her creed.
The point has been made thus proving its worth.
A martyr is born the truth has been freed.
     A carcass before us, a life without breath,
     A martyr of purpose will outlive her death.

 

 

 

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Painting: St Eulalia - 1885 - Tate Gallery, London

A Spanish martyr in the persecution of Diocletian (12 February, 304), patron of the cathedral and city of Barcelona, also of sailors. More may be found here.

http://www.jwwaterhouse.com/view.cfm?recordid=76

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  • PerVirtuous
    November 11

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    You have the ability to capture not only the message of a picture but also its mood. A singular talent of which I am very envious. Bravo.


  • melphleg gold member
    October 25

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    Enjoyed your writing. You draw on knowledge of history and create something beautiful to ponder. I love the final truth of the last lines.

  • ChangingLanes
    October 24

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    Oh, I found this very touching! Beautifully written. I know little of forms, but I have to say I very much enjoyed this. My first poem I have read here and I am impressed!


  • awannabepoet
    October 21

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    As always Amera you show a mastery of form poetry and the sonnet is no exception. I really enjoy the topic too, a bit of history so I can go to bed smarter tonight.





  • IVth Tribulation
    October 21
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    Really good, The last line is my favorite


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 20

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    Beautiful sonnet and a great representation of the painting. I cannot comment on the religious aspects of course but poetically this is right at the top end

    Jeff


  • SteveS gold member
    October 19

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    Rather smooth sonnet. Great tale weaving with fine R and R. This feels sincere and respectful for the subject.


  • Desire gold member
    October 18

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    Woo Hoo~

    This is a Beauty Amera and Love the way You presented
    also the Message~ weaving of words...
    Touches to the core, swells the eyes
    You gave a Voice to the image~ Bravo!!
    Andddddd penned in Sonnet Woot~~~~

    Oy~ Excellente~~~ Love! Love! Love it!
    Keep that quill dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent Beautiful
    Best wishes in the contest~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • penman gold member
    October 18

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    Excellent

    What an amazing write. And as always you are such a master of form. The very best in the contest


  • Summer52
    October 18

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    Amazing write, friend Amera. You are truly gifted with words.


  • MargaretG
    October 18

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    This is an interesting way of looking at it, especially the paradoxes of the couplet. I enjoyed reading the contrasts you found in history. Well done and good luck!

  • CasusVir gold member
    October 18

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    Incredable poem Amera. You did a gret job with the prompt you make it feel like you are actually there in the picture. Good luck in the contest you deserve a metal for this one.


  • poisonivystar4
    October 17

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    Well done!


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 17

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    Your understanding of the painting and subsequent poetic definition is beyond compare.

    This is a great work.

  • this was honest one of your best that i have read, i mean really toy have done a great job on this poem it was amazing, keep it flowing


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 17

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    Spectacular write Sis... as MJ says.. only they and God know the pain. Poignant and important write here!!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    October 17

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    and only they and God know the pain...

    Amazing Amera.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    October 17

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    How I adore your rhyme and rhythm...this is such a lovely write. I envy your ability to write so many forms...you are a most talented poet!

     

     

    Az

  • Purrsanthema
    October 17

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    I've long loved the beautiful, long ignored works of the 19th century, including the works of Waterhouse. As you know, there's a long tradition of artists illustrating poetry: it's wonderful to see the reverse. This wonderful painting of a long forgotten saint, and as we should all remember, a girl, a woman, has now finally been crowned with a worthy and fitting sonnet.

    BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • malmadre gold member
    October 17

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    Pictures Speak Volumes, and then there's the version "one picture is worth a thousand words." These fourteen lines sum up the picture and tell the story, which proves it doesn't always take a thousand, but just a few, arranged and expressed just right.
    A beautiful sonnet! a worthy sonnet.
    Pat


  • Nobody Royale silver member
    October 17

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    Thank You!!

    I am thrilled you choose this picture as your prompt. I am dumbstruck when I look at this picture and desperatly want to write something but words fail me. However your words have been penned brillantly. I absolutely love what you have done with this. You have captured it perfectly with your imagery. I loved
    'The point has been made thus proving its worth.
    A martyr is born the truth has been freed.
    A carcass before us, a life without breath,
    A martyr of purpose now outlives her death.'
    Bravo on a piece well penned. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
    P.S. Please put this in your AN thats all I ask Thank you
    http://www.jwwaterhouse.com/view.cfm?recordid=76


    • Amera gold member
      October 17
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment. That link is in the notes; click on the word "here" or do you really want the entire URL spelled out as well?


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    October 17

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    Eternally grand...


    Neatly composed and sung by the light voice of a pen held by a sublime hand ~painting beauty~ with the colors of a the rainbow of creativity.

    Much gratitude to the author of "The Birth of a Martyr" for showing the world how The American Fine Letters shine.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Hikari Lady
    October 17

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    This was amazing, the ending was so sad and yet so hopeful. I love the way you write sonnets, so easy flowing, so simple worded and yet so amazingly deep and touching. An excellent work indeed.

    Love
    ~Noor


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    October 17
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    Stunning.


  • Denerica
    October 17

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    Wow, you sure do give that speech of life and all that comes at us, poignant, strong, with depth. Excellent. Blessings.


  • myrataal silver member
    October 17

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    Simply Divine!

    Ah! what a powerful sonnet! So appropriate in prompt to the majestic artwork.

    I am always in awe when reading your work.

    Love, Poetess.
    Myra


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 17

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    Brilliant take on the picture (prompt)
    I'm always amazed at how smoothly you
    can weve your thoughts and words into a
    Marvelous Sonnet
    This piece also tells a story
    Fantastic imagery

    Wish you the best in the contest
    Much love my friend

    David


  • Emmyb gold member
    October 17

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    your subject choices always scare me a little as I know so little about them! your poetry is an education in many forms (a bit like cricketjeffs too) in that not only is the way your stanzas are formed an education but the subject itself is a learning experience.

    well written amera

    Emma

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