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When Pigs Fly

 

when pigs fly...as the saying goes

 

things never happen

                            but who knows

 

change your attitude...

 

                            to a positive view

 

no one else can compensate for what you do

 

 

 

Put on those wings...sprinkle with fairy dust

 

stop listening to the negative

 

it's you...that you must trust

 

How strong is your initative...how filled is your heart

How much do you care...all you need is a start

 

Start your wings flapping

                              as the magic dust lifts you high

put forth your incentive

                              and wave the earth good-bye 

 

You're on your way to success

                              as you soar the sky so high

follow the wind current

                              and prove pigs can fly

 

Soar above the clouds

                              that slowly melt away

say hello to the stars

                              that light your chosen ray

 

Fulfill your promised dream

                              and capture your hearts desire

settle slowly back to earth

                              with confidence and pride

 

Brag about the proof you accomplished

                              and calmly breathe a sigh

watch everyone be shocked

                              knowing you're a pig that flies...

 

 

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 25
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    lol I love the concept to this Well done!!!!

  • judmc
    November 22
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    Nice One ! !

    A lovely refreshing fantasy with some useful philosophy
    worked into it's clever rhyming imagery, flowing nicely
    and effortlessly my kind of poem..... loved it..George...


  • faderman1959
    October 24
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    This was great! an absolute pleasure to read and the rhyme and flow of the poem was spot on!


  • Ez Writer silver member
    October 24

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    A splendid poem and
    message !! Beautifully
    expressed ! Love the
    picture he's cute ! I've
    got a metal pig with
    wings , he's bolted to
    the top of one of my
    carports , love your poem !
    best wishes & hugs ,
    Friend Easy


  • arafura gold member
    October 17
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    Great poem. I love the way you wrote this!


  • eastwind32
    October 17
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    So positive and uplifting
    Wonderful rhymes
    Really liked this one

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