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A Fly In My Eye

Why
Does this fly
Like to land
On my eye?

He's not helping
My eyeball
At all.

He just gets
In the way.
And he's
Nothing
To say.

He just
Stands there,
And stares
At
The wall.

Where should
I go?
And what should
I do?
I simply
Don't know,
For this is all
Very new.

It is not
Every day
A fly gets
In the way
Of an eyeball.
And he's so small,

And I really
Don't know
What I should do
At all.

Why does
This fly
Like to land
On my eye?

He has caused
Quite a bit
Of commotion.
He's brought all
Of his friends,
And those
Crayola Crayons,
And I haven't
The foggiest
Notion.

Common sense
Tells me to
Protest.
Common sense
says,
"Draw a
'Don't cross this
Line."

Of course
They have the right
To take rest
From their flight
On an eye.

It's just that
This eye is mine!

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