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I am miserable

I am a fox
hidding and sneaky
thumbtacks in my pocket
and a blade in my bra
with me always
in case they try
to send me away.
I stopped caring,
about school, about life,
about family.
My life is Faith,
and she tells me every
little
thing.
"Don't eat that
fatass,
don't cut so light,
cut deeper
I'm thirsty,
cut NOW,
I don't care where you are,
I HATE you
I hate you."
And I listen to every word

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  • gxer11
    October 18

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    well i wanted to tell ya i love ya no matter what and i can relate to every word but i got through it even after 17 times to the hospital


  • totheend
    October 17
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    the poem is really amazing, cant wait till the next one.
    keep it up.