Sometimes I forget to breathe
Sometimes I forget to leave
And other times I want to crush you with my hand
Just because you're you
I hate the way you play those games
I hate the way you mess with my mind
I hate the way you think you're just so fantastic
When really I'm wondering what I ever saw in you
Sometimes I need to breathe
Sometimes I need to leave
And sometimes I need to completely disregard
How pathetic you are and walk all over you
Ain't no footprints on my head no more
Don't turn your back on me: I won't be ignored
Author notes
Inspired by Don't Stay and Faint by Linkin Park.
In a list
- all for the anger and hatred of... • next in list
- 11-20 • next in list
- rhyme: none • next in list
- Inspiration: music • next in list
A contest entry
- Dark/Sad/Music/Angst/Abuse/Loss by .
302 points, ended February 6, 2005, 84 entries
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1000 points, ended November 18, 17 entries
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Comments
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AWESOME!!! The title of your poem actually hooked me from the very start (the little message from system: Refaint was added to your contest). Very clever! Well-done on writing this poem, I love how the emotion was so raw and physical and out there.
thanks so much for entering and great write
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Heh, I wonder how many relationships this could be applied to? I know that I've had a few that were similar to this. Very well written m'dear.
Keep up the good work! I'll have to hunt you down and smack you if you don't
-Heather
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