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~ Grace Abides in Love ~

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As it sets aside the inevitable,
grace abides in the open nature of love.

Finds its refuge in the greater fortune of things to come.

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25 words and this pic were the prompts: http://ineedchemicalx.deviantart.com/art/Bookends-139916254

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  • A very nice piece, thank you for entering.


  • PoisonParasite
    October 18
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    So short, but beautiful, I love the picture also


  • writetheway
    October 18
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    I really like the ideas here.


  • BellaBaby
    October 17

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    Such a wonderful metaphor. I love the picture. Worth 1000 words indeed


  • Titus gold member
    October 17
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    very good indeed, and imaginative enough to say spellbound.

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