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If I touch you
will I fall apart?
will I burst into tears
at the relief
of being alive?

If I kiss you
will I perish?
will I melt into stone
in the fires
of your passion?

If I cannot have you
will I die?

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  • Twisted Fairy
    October 18, 2009
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    Your portrayal of vulnerability is simplistically crafted here. I was sorta hoping you would go on a bit more.