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Real Love

I feel so breathless
All this running around
gentleness fails
with my cruel crown
My cards are on the table
I need

Real Love
not some fabrication
Real Love
Not just indication
Tell me how I know your love is real

I've been here before
I'll be back for more
maybe this time i will stay
With You
Forevermore

Real Love
not some fabrication
Real Love
Not just indication
Tell me how you wanna make me feel...

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    October 17

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    "I need

    Real Love
    not some fabrication" I know how that feels...Love is so beautiful and precious. Nothing else could possibly compare. Great job on this poem my friend



    -Steve-