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Evil

Evil is not accepted
Evil is not right
Evil cannot live
Evil we must fight

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  • The Devil18
    October 30
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    wow this is good


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 18

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    I think that this can be a lot more in depth. Try not to repeat the same word over and over. Evil - being the first word of each 4 line - that's a bit much. Interesting, basic rhyme but it works.

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