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These Eyes Tell All

My words flow like a river forth
from within life experiences
My own life I write about
I am a walking poet

I have nothing left to say;
it has already been said,
through my actions.
but, you can read it
Within these eyes....

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"I have nothing to say. I am saying it, and that is poetry. "- John Cage

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    1 day ago
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    ok sweeties where and the heck are you!
    i havent seen hide or hair of you,
    stopping by to say I had to come back for a
    second read love this, and keep it coming!

    Rend


  • ZachP silver member
    November 5

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    You have a wonderful take on this prompt, dear poet.

    "it has already been said,

    through my actions."

     

    So true. We speak our lives through the way we live them, and not the words we say. I am in awe, dear friend.

     

    I wish you all the best,

    Zach Estel. 


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 22

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    you have a wonderful sense of flow
    this is beautiful penning

    Love & blessings

    Rend


  • spideracer
    October 19

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    I see you haven't lost your touch, yes I know its been a while but you know how it is with the ups and downs of life. Anyway your poem is awesome and speaks of the poet in all of us I'm sure. Very impressive indeed, take care AP friend.


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    October 17

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    I really liked this piece, for something so short It sure says a hell of a lot
    You have a way with your words, very impressive

  • Very good indeed Aaron! This speaks to the quote very well and certainly got me thinking!
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • Quinsmom
    October 17
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    Nice work honey...i understand it you are right

    • Ademon
      October 17
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      Try reading the one before this one too sweetie... thanks!

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