Betrayal leads to revelation
With cold dead eyes I see the truth
Abandoned in my time of need
I am that which is antiquated and degraded
Discarded like a meaningless piece of garbage
Just ignore all my dedications and forsake me
This hysterical state of mind shall not be my ruin
I have survived tragedy of immense proportions
I am used to it now
Nothing can break me
Try as you might
You will fail in the end
With every bit of pain inflicted I only grow stronger
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AWEOSME
very good, i like the perception of this, "nothing can break me, try as you might, you will fail in the end" perfect way to conclude
amazingg <33 p.s ive got more coming soooooon
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Strong poem, some great imagery in this.
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BRAVO! BRAVO!
THAT WAS POWERFUL IMPACT!
and hellya ....there are times
when we've got to stand UP
for OURSELVES!
and wipe the bullshit off our shoes!
WAY TO WRITE
WAY TO USE YOUR INK!
ears/seattle
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good write
i enjoyed.
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