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Forbidden Sins

Missing image
There's no time to waste,
I must have you in my arms.
Your body is sweet to taste
and is hot as fire like a five-alarm.

I know you will fill my needs
with a sexy passionate desire.
You're the air I was meant to breathe
and of course will always admire.

So let's get lost in lust
and let the heat glow like stars.
Forbidden sins will be a must
as it makes us who we are.

Author notes

Picture from contest which inspired the poem.

A friend sent the contest link for she knew I like to write from pictures. This is actually the first piece I have written in weeks and it didn't take long for the picture was that inspiring. Thanks Prez for the link.

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  • Raining Kisses gold member
    December 6, 2009
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    MMM STUNNING...IN ITS ENTIRITY...RIGHT...TIME FOR A COLD SHOWER ME THINKS...LOL THIS IS SUPERBLY PENNED
    BRAVO
    T


  • zhaniswolf
    October 28, 2009
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    Lovely poem. Finally getting over here to comment on this lol. Love the pic and the words. Great job on the bronze!


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      December 29, 2009
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      I'm finally getting here to respond to comments and thank you for a lovely one Ted E


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 19, 2009
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    Nice


  • Pure Thought
    October 18, 2009
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    Good luck

    Well done, makes the statement without going hard core like I did.

    Buddy


  • the rose gold member
    October 17, 2009

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    Wonderfully penned Ted E Bare. I hope you are picked to be this special girls lover.
    Seems like a winner to me.

    Good luck

    Rosalinda


  • ennovy silver member
    October 17, 2009

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    Wow you sure kicked it into high gear....with that dyamic rhyming
    and you truly spoke like a lover. I hope you are chosen, cause this
    poem is like magic. best of luck in the contest.....novy


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      December 29, 2009
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      I have to say you have always been such a great supporter of mine and I truly appreciate it. I was shooting for 2d or 3rd and not 1st. I'm satisfied with the bronze and so many great responses to the poem is better than any trophyTed E

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