Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Dementia

Darling man who's so dear to me...
Sweet, loving, funny, and kind everything about him is all devine...
Maybe the only person that stands by my side with him I have nothing to hide. Everything about him makes me smile, laugh, feel like I'm somebody.....
Nothing anyone says fazes me when im with him...
They say he's gonna hurt me in the end..
I think he'll love me to the end.....
All I can say is that when I'm with him time seems to never end...
I can tell you is I'm sure in love with him.....



I DONT KNOW!!!!!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • xXDementiaXx
    October 21
    Edit | Reply

    Awsomes

    I like it lol


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    October 17

    Edit | Reply
    It is a lovely poem and really sweet your heart is in the right place, but I have a few recomendations for it that might help you.Everything about him kind, loving,funny,and sweet... should go Sweet, loving, funny,and kind everything about him is all devine. Add on to the next line with him I have nothing to hide. All i can say is that when im with him i can tell you sure that i'm in love with him.... I thought would be better this way
    All I can say is that when I am with him time seems to never end.
    I can tell you is I'm sure in love with him....
    s s I love my always Searra