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Ned Kelly

Back in 1865 a man was born who was to become australias most notorious outlaw
His name was Ned Kelly
Wanted by the law for because he hit a lawman who tried to kiss his siter in law
A shot rang out a bullet struck the coppers arm  did really harm him
But repayments came heavy and strong
Ned went bush with his brothers and band
Roamed the ladns near glenrowan
Forced to rob the mail vans  kept covered by his fellow man
The poters read murderer 10 hundred pounds
Dead or alive  his brother decided to be a judis
Told the coppers where Nd and the boys hang out
They rode all 20 of the possie REifles and guns had come
By the time they arrived 100 of them
Ned had a plan siuts made of armour and the 5 would stand gunning
Lonigan was first to shoot with a buerst he was a leading copper
Ned fired back  shot him dead thru the head
Then it was on for young and old
Bullets hit the steel bouncing back hitting  constable Teale who fell dead
Go for the legs shots hit home and own Ned fell 50 shells later he was still lying firing
Captured  taken to jail  tried and sentanced to hang
Then they cut off his head as warning to Neds clan that if you challehe thelaw youll end up dead like  NED KELLY
the man who became a legend

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  • guardianhost gold member
    October 18

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    Exciting and sad, a shame about how he lived

    He was trying to protect his family ,
    He became an outlaw because he hit a law man who was making advances on his sister -in-law? What a terrible way to have to Die,
    Poor Ned Kelly,
    Thank you for a great history lesson, Another awesome write !
    Cyber Hugs,
    Cheryl


    • glenn shannon silver member
      October 18
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      yeah poor neddy he was just a dude who was pushed over the edge by a cop who held some power meglamania i think its called we dont remember the cop but ned lives on in legends bless you hun xo


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 18

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    this is awesome hun i love this story.. you did a great job on this.. well penned hun as always hugs Angel♥
    this rocks

    • glenn shannon silver member
      October 18
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      Ned was a bit naughty but he was set up originally and forced to take flight then cracked the shits and became what the police wanted him to be glad you enjoyed it hun bless you always gleen xo

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