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Etheree # 5




Ice
water
vomiting,
gravitating,
violent power
precipitate prisms
in the quintessence of the
gorge as misty vapors cling to
perpendicular weeping, seeping,
scintillating hushed haunt of water nymphs

Darlene Sperber
October 16, 2009



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  • Cynthia Gaines
    November 1, 2009

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    Ditto...

    I agree with all Catz had to say... This etheree is just awesome!! I thank you for sharing your muse with all of us, and keep it flowing, Poet!!
    & s,
    Cyn


  • catz Moderators member
    October 18, 2009

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    A wonderful Etheree of the beauty of a waterfall and it's decent into the depths of mist filled mountainous gorge. I could feel the turmultous water as it fell commandingly from it's lofty lair
    A brilliantly penned poem, Sis I wish I could give it more applauds so here's some special ones

    love and
    Dee


    • J aime Coudre silver member
      October 18, 2009
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      Thanks for reading my poems and making such positive comments on them. You give me so much encouragment. Luv ya

  • Purrsanthema
    October 17, 2009

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    Not sure I liked that Christmas! lol! Great etheree!

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