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From Necks We Swing, Banners in Hand

A chorus of chords encircle this neck,
a noose tightening in its slack.
Each new burden leaving one a wreck
makes one wish badly to go back.
Decisions made, no consequence thought,
haunt more with each passing day.
Never the foresight of what may be wrought
assuming decisions naught go one's way.
clicking one's tongue with nervous manner
as judgment unrelentingly awaits.
Feeble in arms, one raises the banner
of anarchy driven, chaotic fates.

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  • desert places
    November 5
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    Amazing

    The last two lines of this resonate with a haunting tenor