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Crawfish Springs

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At the sunrise of one Georgia morning
I sat with in a field of pure green grass,
even that grass of home, watching,
as a light breeze blew each blade,
presenting to me its own dance of life.

Dew had cried up them, those blades,
becoming to me tear drops,
those of southern soldiers,
having baptized this land with their blood.

And my love's soul lay upon it, this land,
as he sleeps an eternal sleep,

deep within its core,
in the company of so many.

I am forever laden with the burden
to never love again,
never as I once had then.
For his loyalty and courage, that of my love,
prevailed for the sake of his family, his country, his home.

Is it that he will remember me,
in the eternal realm of lives.
Will he know, will he believe its me.

Yes, it is my selfishness,
in the need to be loved even as he,
that does plague my soul.

Yet I forget not,
all that has been given,
for the sake of tradition,
for the sake of love,
for the sake of Dixie.

I am not, I know,
the only widow left behind.
Though I am forever the only one,
to remember him.

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The home to many souls, Crawfish Springs Chickamauga Georgia
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  • Rheea gold member
    October 22

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    This is everything to me and it breaks me into pieces my South.

    Dixie I know this has to be yours .. no one loves and understands  feels as I do except you.

    The art work was from from Bonnie's collection sweet girl.


    • Dixie Dawn gold member
      October 23
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      I had a look on the contest page and found her, THANK YOU!!!

  • Bruce silver member
    October 20

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    Dixie, This made chills run up and down my spine. You have such a feeling for the south and that tragic time that is slipping away from the country's memory. My mother has a picture of herself held by her great grandfather, a former corporal in the 11th VA Fincastle Rifles and a veteran of Antitam and Gettysburg. To see the phot is to look back 150 years. Keep that memory alive my Sister!

  • chiefmac
    October 17

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    The flow is smooth and moves the reader through the lost love (as in all forms of war) never fades beyond memories. Lovely journey to historic period so many remember and visions offer to capture years past where many passed in the pride of countries army bound to turbulance embraced over states rights. Great work


  • cazzy71
    October 17
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    Another great write

    Glad you are back and still written strong pieces. x

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