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the hidden track



there is a small tendril of
fire licking the back of my hand,

there is a wave of the sea coming
from under the door,

the rushing in my ears,
the sounds of

another world
coming through the basement wall

the basement
a metaphor of our subconscious

my hands are wet with
desire

we have still not
taken that long, slow step

not closed the window against winter,
have not spoken the truth

on the B side
backwards

you speak
to a rising pulpit

through the tall grass,
the empty field, dark

and forgiving.
i never wanted it to end this way,

on a sudden
misunderstanding

the way the numbers on the clock slow,
no second hand  here

just the waiting

for the sun to breach the arms of the earth
rise free into the sudden blue sky

the stars shivering
and winking away



Author notes

You should listen to Sage Francis's Sea Lion while reading this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BffumeEaYOI


We all live in a house on fire, no fire department to call; no way out.

Tennessee Williams

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  • tara wilson gold member
    October 17

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    i love your poetry....god, what an awesome metaphor.


    • philosphyofkate
      October 18
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      so many people say it's crap, but honestly, i love to write for other people. i love to write for my readers. i just love to write.


  • autarky
    October 16

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    you are phenomenal. why don't you write more often?

    • philosphyofkate
      October 17
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      cause i suck at life!! haha. i want to write more. i mean to write more. i think i'm in the middle of a huge life-change and while this is the perfect time to write, i can't seem to find the words.