Words complect off me I wish I Knew was false.
My bodys solid
My mind is weak
So weak every thing I hear my Not be true
I think it is If it involve Me or..
The complection Of My Body.
A contest entry
- Quickie! (5 hours) (20 poets) (dark poetry) by RazorbladeKiss14.
433 points, ended October 21, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think of my poem. This is my first poem just Tell me things to make it Better.
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1 question, what prompt did you use for my contest?
Can you please put it in your author notes!! -
wow this poem was very creative and powerful in the words. You did a very good job! It's great by it's self. No need of changing. Plus my advice to you is never change your poem because one day you'll look for it and then wonder where it and then remember you changed it, or threw it away or something. But that's just my advice. Don't take it to heart if it offends you. Just an idea. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!!!
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