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A Lie, Oh My...

i can not, will not tell a lie
for if i lie i'll surely die
and if i die who there will cry
but a lowly fly up in the sky
and oh so high in the sky this fly
will cry a lie for i who died
and of this lie he'll surely die
for i who died, would not cry.

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Toma Wolf27

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  • SlowlyBreathing
    October 17
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    This made my day better.
    Great poem, it reminded me of the Doctor of all rhyming-ness.
    Good works.xD