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The Dance

Milky threads
plucked by a
swollen tongue

when seasons
melt to
Spring,

the dancing ebb
of spiders; mocking



I saw this when
she smiled.













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  • Bob Fox
    November 18
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    Interesting words. Perhaps a deeper meaning froma recent avent? But a cerain sadness and a desire to help/heal some pain. One must be true to themselves for in the end it may be all we have.


  • Treefingers
    November 7

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    WOW! Why have i never commented on this one.This is really eerie and amazingly written...great job!

  • patron saint
    October 16
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    how gorgeous is this? amazingly so.

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