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Love?

Do not think because you've smiled I
    will slowly melt. And trust
me when I say that reason was far lost on me
    during my one-day stand.
Don't doubt me- I won't plead for you
'Cause that's just who I am.

I can't tell what you think of me,
  but to my biased eyes
it appears you've taken my advice; kicked cruelty
  and erased your lies. I'll try not to hurt your butterflies
in case you really do still dream of me.

I'll try to break your iron gavel, though I doubt I will
  succeed. And I guess I won't unravel
the strings, no chains, with which you bind me to you.
And it's suddenly easier to say "I love you too",
But until then
I'll blow your words as out of perportion as I can.

I laugh- I bet you think I'm ignorant.
Don't worry- I know we cannot start anew.
Listen carefully, I'll tell you. Today I smelled his Axe
  like sweet perfume.
See? Even Aphrodite reminds me we are ancient
Therefore, I'll keep quiet. Hush!
                                                    Pretend you never knew.

Author notes

a) i need a title
b ) the axe refers to my other crush that got in the way of the relationship being spoken about.

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