Because of lust Cain killed Abel
his generations suffered the hell
craving for this earthly wealth
Then come the lust for women which vex men
Jezzebel who sits on the lake of lust-bie then
That naughty men should sex the law of chastity
little girls lust for it at young age
Then there is rape at backstage
Defilement to extreme damage
In every ass there is an eye
that lust to it from behind
then there is Pimp and whore
To vex the city of sex and more
bold men rape little girls so small
Blood spills, rought action against a wall
The first deadly sin
Lucifer wants to win
church leaders that likes little boys
calling kids to come play with rubber toys
diverging from the true teaching of Christ
Deadly sins on hte rise
Lust
Author notes
Lust
A contest entry
- Seven Deadly Sins (Group contest for Manically Macabre Group only) by twelfthknight.
1000 points, ended October 23, 2009, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you spelt hate wrong for starters but truly a very moving poem i love the content it just goes to show the ugliness of the world i would think
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deep intense write you have penned
well done poet
excellent graphic imagery
made for a strong write
good take on the prompt
like this bit..
Because of lust Cain killed Abel
his generations suffered the hell
craving for this earthly wealth
thanks for the share
Darky
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Jeez this pulls no punches
Raw as hell telling the sad graphic tales to which sadly reality of truth hits
I felt so many emotions reading this write and, wish you all the best in this contest
as you have given it an edge
Julie
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This is dark, deep and disturbing considering the content. Not reading for the light of heart. You've done very well with Lust, showing the dirty, disgusting underbelly of our society. Good luck in the contest.
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I agree that this is a very powerful write, but I think you have done very well to capture that darkest side of lust
very well written, Thanks for entering and good luck
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A very powerful poem, I think that you have captured things that happen in the world very well, though I think some might find it shocking because of the vividness in your write.
Thanks you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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