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Morning Love

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I take you gently into my cupped hands
bringing you toward eager, thirsty lips
feeling the rush of love
slide deliciously across my tongue,
hot, orgasmic, blissful
I swallow,

licking my lips
savoring every luscious drop

             ~oh my god~



there's nothing like

 that first cup of morning coffee.

 

Author notes

Get outta the gutter lol
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  • robena
    October 19

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    lol. you got me on this one! i took this piece somewhere else. or should i say it took me.
    this was an intresting read. thanx for sharing

  • Bruce silver member
    October 18

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    You have written this with such talent and love that it is much, much more than a gag poem. The reader can see both meanings simultaneously and both laugh and revel in your write.


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 18
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      Thank you Bruce..I was just being silly trying to jumpstart my muse lol This is what came out


  • light to a dreamer gold member
    October 18

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    LOL I love this poem it is all me!!!! You have just picked up every man and then put them down hard wonderful write with such feeling and flow. OH my I need my coffee!

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 18
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      Or is that picked him up and put him down soft Lol Err, I should shut up now Thank you for the read and comment..Enjoy your


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    October 17

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    Haha. I like this alot. Very, very well done. I got a big kick out of this one. I like the ending twist to this poem. Great job.

    Mike


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 17
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      Then my job here is done LMAO Thanks Chuckers..I'm glad you got a kick out of it. hehe


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 17

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    Hahaha... yes, my mind did go to the gutter and I was getting all hehe

    Awesome!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 17

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    excellent

    Enjoyed the read
    I was thinking it was going to be a love poem
    Then got to the end..Love it LOL
    I just posted a new one hope you come visit me
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 17
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      Thank you Susan..I appreciate the read and comment. I'll visit your page asap as well.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 17

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    L.O.L.

    I was looking for you there! l.o.l. j.k...this was VERY enjoyable, and i too LOVE
    how that first cup envelopes me in such a satisfying way.. l.o.l.
    excellent work my friend


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 17
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      Howdy Swan! Always good to see you You ARE talking about coffee aren't you? lmao


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    October 17

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    Hahaha I freakin love this you have penned such a clever piece
    BRAVO

    ( Gets outta the gutter )


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 17

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    Haha I read your AN then read the poem and Knew it was going to be coffee lol So very well penned. It just shows how poems can be interpreted so very differently though! Some of us with our minds above our navels and some below Mine was above of course
    Love it!

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 17
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      LOL You cheated that's like reading the last page of a book first. LOL Thank you my dear sweet friend for the kind comment.


  • Haygood gold member
    October 16

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    I love it!

    The ol' misdirection poem, yes, but your mind had to go to the gutter first...we just played follow the leader. Very well done! Keep directing, we shall keep following.


  • John Faulkner
    October 16
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    Same as yours..lol


  • Cannonsfire
    October 16

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    Very clever But it is that first cup that tastes so much better than any other lol

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 16
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      LOL Yep, and sadly the only stimulating thing I have to wake me up lol Why am I lol'ing when I really feel like lol

  • John Faulkner
    October 16

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    I read this in the shower,,..to cool off..wow.You seduced me..lol..Seriously. you did a lovely job with this..I loved it..

    John..Do you want to hear my own version?


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      October 16
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      Thanks John..my muse was just being silly lol Sure, what's your version??


  • penman gold member
    October 16

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    Whew!

    Coffee huh? Right, you were thinking caffeine. Great job


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 16

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    Ha-ha-HA You post a pic like that with this and then tell us to get our mind out of the gutter?
    Get your mind out of there first. lol
    Great poem.

    Joe

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