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Sardanapalian

Villains breathe legions and legions for a while; buy a melting key to open doors beyond an emerald sea, and death and a dying Juliet, you shall see. Deeper, I breathe breathtaking sounds; those legions sell elongated keys to open doors beyond an emerald sea; vis-à-vis, I turn a key at the clouded apex drearily; a Daliesque key opens a door beyond an emerald sea. Breathtaking devils, sound like wind at sea, Deeper, I breathe breathtaking sounds (as I can see, an artificial key opens doors beyond an emerald sea.) A catching of the breath blooms darknesses eerily, and launches Sardanapalian into eternity Alone, Juliet pulls, iron-willed, beyond dream worlds as these older stories breathe our own selves, as legions beyond Sibylline breathe on our shelves, and breathtaking dream keys beyond beyond breathtaking villains beneath beneath the emerald sea breathe endlessly.

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Published in Outsiders Writer Collective

Poetry for Lost Souls #4

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  • HereComesTheSun
    October 31
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    judged

    this piece to me i found to be well written and a fantastic read.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 17

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    Fantastic! From beginning to end it held me captive in the incredible imagery and word use. Amazing poem.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~